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Write clearly. Be concise. Avoid wordiness.

写作清晰, 务必精简, 避免赘言.

i watch my action tense and wordiness in sentences when i am writing my technical diddley.

我在写技术文章时注意句子中的动作时态和多余词。

when writing with a computer, you must guard against wordiness.

用电脑写作时，你千万不要多嘴。

i have always loved budweiser's can and bottle labels: the busyness, the wordiness, the medallion-ness.

我一直喜爱的百威和瓶身标签：忙碌，华丽虚饰的语，奖章性。

to cut down in wordiness, use the active voice rather than the passive voice.

为了避免罗嗦，要使用主动语态，而不要使用被动语态。

people listened impatiently, and expressed frustration at the wordiness of his speech.

人们不耐烦地听着演讲，并对穆巴拉克冗长的演讲表示出沮丧。